Wednesday, 20 October 2010

Improvement

1 comment:

  1. Nice photo but I think it needs to be moved down or made smaller, the title is covering half of her head! I like the choice of font but you need to make decisions on which font colour to use, there is too much variation. In addition, the text needs to be parallel and not angled, it's more conventional. Go back to the exemplar on Fronter for tips on layout and where the text needs to go.

    Don't forget - you need to make sure that your photographs are varied in content (various people, action, maybe outdoor shots) and use different shots - mid, close up, long shot - also use different angles if possible.

    Don't forget a date and a catchy slogan underneath the title in a smaller font. What would be suitable?

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